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Please provide me your quality comments to make my websites more professional

What sites do you mean?

1. You???ll brand your web site, business and yourself
by submitting articles to e-zines. You could include
your name, business name, your credentials, web site
address and e-mail address in your resource box.

2. You will become known as an expert on the topics
you write about. This will give you and your business
extra credibility which will help you compete against
your competition.

3. Your article might also be placed on the publisher???s
home page. If they publish each issue on their home
page this will give you some extra exposure.

4. You might get extra exposure if the e-zine publisher
archives their e-zine on their site. People might want
to read the back issues before they make the decision
to subscribe.

5. You will get free advertising. This will allow you to
spend your profits on other forms of advertising. You
could buy advertisements in other e-zines that don???t
publish your articles.

Use do follow bookmarking sites like Delicious Google bookmark new swine Reddit and Digg that is the way to get good back link high pr. 

  Use do follow article submission site like Ezine and articlebase is the best for the ranking  of your site.

I have viewed the first website from your signature. The first impressiona was your website is overloaded. You have too much colors and design elements. You added a lot information. I suggest you to use few colors

Keep building backlinks dude... nothing else to suggest... submit the same post in multiple forums asking for feedback on the sites you're promoting, lol

I think your websites have too much content and images, that's why it looks overloaded. I suggest you to make more free space. It will concentrate all attention on your main items.

You have provided well enough information in the first website. But then the features you use in your face site were also noticeable in the second site. Did you do this in purpose?

Feedback for your site essayprovider(dot)com...It is quite professional in its look. Only two backlinks in Google. Page rank is good i.e 4. Keep getting links fro high PR sites to increase you rankings and PR.

I like the theme and layout, its not boring and has clean and simple look to it. But just like everyone said stick to it with building links, thats what helps the most.

The red in the first link is a little much, especially in the center background behind essay editing, essay writing, etc. Other than that I like the theme and color mix, its easy on the eyes but the site fills out nicely.

At day 2 go naran. U may skip Lalazar. I didnt been there. Bt ppl dnt recommending lalazar. Bt if road is open and u have time, take a ride 4m naran to jalkhad and enjoy views

If you would like to promote your website then there are various things which are to be followed. However you may post superior quality content, forums posting, blog commenting, social bookmarking. By these you may create link of your website freely and in this way you may also promote your website.

The best advice is simply to keep your design formal and yet fun, as well as to regularly put up relevant and reliable content. "Professionalism" can be pretty loosely defined at times, but you can pretty much get this covered by simply using your website as a window to your business without any tricks or lies to attract more customers.

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lol where is website link ??? :P